You're Probably in Japan By Now (In Honor of April

April 2, 2017


In honor of April, I have decided to share the poem "You're Probably in Japan By Now."


Originally published in Hanging Loose, the poem references TS Eliot's "The Wasteland."


The poem also references biographical information about Mark Rothko being afraid of water, found in the James Breslin bio. 










You’re probably in Japan by now.

I can tell by how the ocean turned blue

again this morning. How last night traveled

west, over waves, without a plane, or even

a stop in San Francisco. I find it so disturbing,

the way time can change, the way you

made this turning blue from a wispy pool

of red, soft—like seaweed— before one pull

from the ocean. I try not to think about you,

your hair so blue from black as you swim

away from shore, with a great wide wave,

nervous, as not kissing can sometimes be

when water is concerned.


*          *          *          *          *


The closest I’ve ever been to your eyes

is the day you looked concerned for me

and my paintings during lunch. I’d been studying

patterns lately before that. For example: It’s much

less cliché to paint eyes than to write about them.

But they both feel as natural to me, and certainly reveal more

than kissing, or eating, or even blue might, as it’s focused

on your face in drops. Now on my face, through me, to a painting

about Mark Rothko being afraid of water—

through sunrise after sunrise, dripping down canvas

after canvas and then turning into a black church

across water, through me and over a white tablecloth,

the sky so sharp inside, to a curve, where water

meets morning.



You’re probably in Japan by now,

even now, standing here, I can tell

with the ocean remembering dark, and my sneakers

standing there, back there, next to the shadow of my car.


And here, back here, against the gray cement wall

the water makes this noise, like Ezra Pound

sounding out “April. No— April.

April is the cruelest month. April is the cruelest

month. April is the cruelest” especially this year


when winter won’t let go of water, between the sand

and icicles, this stabbing pain has left us both

thinking of Montana which is where all good poems go


to die— there in the bottom of Flathead Lake, which prefers Eliot

over Pound. Which is where all states go when given the chance               

to settle at the bottom of anything. But this leaving

makes it crueler. Like music you can’t listen to

and the words, mismatched

in your head. Like the white as it drowns out black


or blue, depending on the rhythm, or the length of breaking

one can wish to do. And I know all of this

is like those black seaweed pods everyone knows

to break. The weakest points create the greatest sound


as solid switches to the forced escape of air that survived, somehow,

beneath the ocean. Holding between the tides. I wonder about the air

we breathe and how shallow and cold any moving thing can be


as spring creeps back and forth around the sand, the land

buried in the froth only Atlantic breezes know to send bursting

to bluer air. There again, it washes back against

the marble sand, the ocean, both

carving music and the air, caught here, and again to me.



You’re probably in Japan by now, but lately on the black and gray

dissolving under silver, I’ve been confused about how to time my step.


My leg poised to take the step there, but hanging in the air for a second

or two too long, and so afraid I’ll get caught slipping beneath the escalator.


Just yesterday I realized I’d turned Mark Rothko into a character for my poems,

and how interesting paint and sound are compared to abstraction.


What a terrible tragedy to turn light— breaking to black fog— settling against

a wall— or creating a wall— into a caricature or a person even. Love.


I do this to all things I love, which should be flattering, but is not—

and now I have a strained relationship with Untitled from 1958.


Some of it is because Rothko was afraid of water and some of it

is because I’m afraid of Rothko who bought an old YMCA and painted


until orange was exhausted. There’s something about looking

a painting onto canvas that is very different from painting, cigarette in mouth.

It’s easier to look at a massive block of light melting like a molten ice cube

than to look at a man dissolving into paint.



You’re probably in Japan by now, wondering about your relationship

to the ocean. There are painters here, measuring bodies with outstretched arms

and three fingers extended toward shore. Toward torsos, toward the sky—

hitting stride in imitations of the image. How long can anyone wait for a color

to resolve itself? Seriously, consider it, all of us are imitating;

counting the length of eyelashes and perfume remains

that can somehow trail in an even smoke. This looking for rhythm


makes these painters too, as blue is seen in water only when the sky

is reflected back, long after it is ground, and before it is thin

and black and suffocating. Here it settles to smooth, as the coast

demands attention from both the shallow and the sun, watch.

Is it possible you’ve forgotten something about difference? while water


rises toward confusion and white-white trembling, spilling forward

over shore. Because the easiest trick in painting is to create depth

by using diagonal lines. They leave toward vanishing points— an Italian

revolution, as was the lack of halos over figures created from solid

light. But this relationship of light in front of light, without a line

in sight, is impossible to recreate. Yet it’s everywhere. Look through,

and as sky bends away from all of us, there is black somewhere—there—

in there. But that empty we run from might be beautiful, as endings

so often are. I had a teacher once who said a painting is finished

when to do more would be to ruin it. The point was to ride that tension

as far as you could. I have been imitating him ever since. That point

is closer. I am doing nothing. Add paint. That point is vanishing. Sure,


all this standing by the ocean, counting poems, watching the affairs of light

conspire through sound is wonderful, but carrying perspective into subsets

signals considerable understanding. This could be like nothing, this could be

nothing like kissing. Or silence. But more than anything,


I miss the ways in which sunlight can imitate painting in the hands of Rothko,

and how, in the hands of Rothko scotch on rocks might imitate the neon,

nonsensical light of Manhattan at night. Or a cigarette, mediating the space

between his thick eyeglasses, the thick sheen of 3 drinks washing across his eyes, 

3 fingers of scotch as thick as smoke as smoke meanders into orange—

into some sort of consolation prize; for even chain-smoking artists might be better described as airplanes. And all this talk of fear and flying, when in effect

none of it reminds us at all of falling, but rather, those silver shapes

pasted on the falling rain are more frightening because no shadows can cast

on the blue remains, which is how we all define our space, ourselves.


I keep wondering if I have skin, or if your scent is closer to that touch

than even the most delicate of flower petals could ever render. And if love

is looking for those colors to resolve. There seems some lack of understanding, lack of acceptance. There is genius in seeing that color, in seeing through orange,


in seeing through the character of orange, and how terrible it is, in seeing black

back there someplace, in seeing a cathedral of orange on orange on orange (light

light light). Black. But there might be love in leaving this alone. In leaving all of this alone. Forget the character of suffering. Of emptiness. There is safety in there somewhere.




You can download a PDF version of "You're Probably in Japan By Now" at the Mass Cultural Council.


Interested in learning more about Ezra Pound? Check out the book "Pronto" by Elmore Leonard!







About the author:


Kurt Cole Eidsvig received an MFA from the Creative Writing Program at the University of Montana in 2002 and his writing has been published in journals like Slipstream, Hanging Loose, Borderlands, Main Street Rag and The Southeast Review.  He has been a featured columnist on, and a regular contributor to sites like and


. His work has earned awards like a Warhol Foundation / Creative Capital Fellowship, a Massachusetts Cultural Council Fellowship, the Edmund Freeman Award, and a University of Montana Teaching Fellowship. His writing has also earned semi-finalist awards from The Sawtooth Poetry Prize and Zone 3 Books, as well as finalist recognition from the Elizabeth George Foundation. Eidsvig has taught courses in Writing, Art, and Art History at UMASS Boston, The University of Montana, and the Isabella Stewart Gardner Museum in Boston.



Please reload

Featured Posts

Moby Dick and Drowning Girl

October 20, 2017

Please reload

Recent Posts

October 5, 2017

September 23, 2017

September 21, 2017

September 20, 2017

Please reload

Please reload

Search By Tags